Faramo Region Story Line

Characters:
Main character: Tyler(born in faramo, 10 years old, first league in faramo)
Traveler #1(boy): Zach(born in sinnoh, 12 yeas old, first league in sinnoh but only made up to 2nd round, second league faramo)
Traveler #2(girl): Sky(born in faramo, 10 years old, first league in faramo)

Rival #1(boy): Ronny(born in faramo, neighbor of tyler, 10 years old, fiorst league in faramo)
Rival #2(girl): October(born in johto, 14 years old, first league johto, made it to finals but lost, second league in faramo)

Professor: Maple(born in faramo, very old, professer of faramo)

Team Draco Boss: Drake(born in faramo, loves to be evil, leader of team draco)
Team Draco Commander #1: Bella(the strongest person behind drake of team draco, born in faramo)
Team Draco Commander #2: Max(master of tricks, loves to create mahahm, alot of strategy pokemon, born in faramo)
Team Draco Commander #3: Beauty(master of defense, born in faramo, master at copycat)
Team Draco Professor: Startrum(professer of team draco, very smart, old, master of speed)

Tyler’s mom: Andrea
Tyler’s dad: Daniel
Ronny’s mom: Helen
Ronny’s dad: Doug
Ronny’s brother: Chris
Tyler’s mom: Andrea
Tyler’s dad: Daniel
Ronny’s mom: Helen
Ronny’s dad: Doug
Ronny’s brother: Chris

Cool story

though at the beginning it said he was with zach when he turned out to be with ronny. was that a mistake.

was the mystery thunder pokemon Zapdos?

this story sounds good so far and will probably get better. I can't wait to see what happens next!

yes that was a mistake with the name mix ups

the pokemon he saw(or thinks he saw) will not be told and is a mystery

if u see the episode title, strange happenings one after another

rain come out of no where
a huge band that they think is thunder happens
another thunder(or as tyler thinks it is a roar) and makes him fall
ronny's dad leavesand goes back home(or does he)

so yea a lot of starnge things so far

ya Mysterious pokemon

great story so far but when will there be more?

thunder which is like a roar

Raikou???

or if it is flying overhead

Zapdos???

or something out of the blue

Arceus with Shock Plate???

sorry i haven't updated
but i have had many tests, since its the end of the marking period inj my school
this happens six times a year, and i have like 10-12 classes, 2 quizzes per class and 1 test per class each marking period
so yea I've been swamped
but Tuesday and Wednesday I'm off school
so i will update the platinum walkthrough that isn't on the forums, and ill try to make more land for faramo region
I'm not sure i will update this story for a few reasons, i need to make Tyler's and everyone else main Pokemon team
i need to fix the first chapter, and i want to wait until more people come to the forums

i also want to ask some questions about this to you:

-Should the chapters be longer??
-How much detail do you want??
-If you have any ideas for the story line, what are they?? If you wish to share please PM me, if you dont i will delte it without looking at it.

so yea
just to tell you guys as a summary b4 i actually make all the chapters..........
so this story has much mystery......such as relationships with legendary Pokemon, strange pasts that cause major futures...

well........you'll see for yourself when it happens

for now im gonna show u a short storyline of the first chapter....just so you can get whats going on

-Tyler and Ronny play outside
-Tyler asks Ronny to go to his house...says yes
-it rains(thunder, lightning and pouring rain) and Tyler goes to get Ronny
-Tyler hears a loud thunder that caused him to fall and faint
-as Tyler got up, he couldn't here but he saw Ronny and his mom trying to get him up
-He tells them the story, but they said they heard no thunder at all
-Tyler says it was just him and he tripped, said he hit his head and thought that it was from thunder(lie)
-As Tyler thought about it, it wasn't thunder, it was a roar....a Pokemon's roar
-Ronny and his family get ready to go, as they leave the rain stops just like that
-Ronny's dad stops when it happens, but know one knows that he did stop
-As they are eating they notice he is gone, Ronny's mom calls the house, he answers and says he isnt feeling good
-Ronny and his family go home, and Tyler goes to bed


now to answer some questions:

the roar that Tyler heard may be a pokemon
it doesnt have to be legendary remember that
and you guys are not gonna know who it was(or what it was) until it is revealed in the story

To shayminblastose........there will be more but nit anytime soon
maybe tomorrow ill make a short version of the second chapter

How come in the story i was 3rd person yet some of the sentences were 1st person such as "We were running"

like i said
it was a rough draft
i made it in LITERALLY 10 minutes
ok
i didn't care much about the grammar, neatness or organization
just to show u guys the main plot of whats gonna happen in the beginning

i hope that answers yours and everyone else questions that were similar